Every time I try to come near you
An anonymous gravity cages my love for you.
Path reaching your
love is easy however,
The only hurdle is my goal
I fear it might
distance us forever.
To defeat the destiny, I need some time dear
May be few weeks or months or year,
But the candle lit in my heart won’t easily die
Witnesses are the
stars and the moonlight sky.
Ask my heart any day
Whether it beats for you?
Every beat would sound your name
For my love is explicitly
true.
In some cold-night if you miss me O’ Love
Just close your eyes and feel my love.
Akin to a dry rose I will live in your book
Whenever lonely just give me a look.
I promise to accept your Love
The day I conquer planets all nine
Down on my knees with a ring in my hand
My head will bow before you in the shrine.
Flirt marne k liye guitar kaafi nahi hai kya ab Romantic poetry bhi likhna shuru kar diya.
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ReplyDeleteThanx anywayz.
Happy that u read it!
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